24/04
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: What motivates you to study English?
People who can speak in English fluently motivate me a lot. I've been into English-speaking country since i was preschool child. I used to say aloud "Hiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" to the foreigners living in same neighbor hood at the age of 4, 5. I studied English only in Korea at school, rarely had enough chance to speak in English. Even though I did a double majored in English literature, sadly I'm not such a good speaker of English. This made me choose Power English and it really helps me alot.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sending this in. I hope that you will become a fluent English speaker.
~Kelly^^
Essay: What motivates you to study English?People who can speak in English fluently motivate me a lot.
>> Correct.
>> or: I am really motivated by people who can speak Ebglish fluently.
I\'ve been into English-speaking country since i was preschool child.
>> I\'ve been into an English-speaking country since I was in preschool.
I used to say aloud \"Hiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\" to the foreigners living in same neighbor hood at the age of 4, 5.
>> I used to say \'hi\' loudly to the foreigners living in our neighborhood when I was four and five years old.
I studied English only in Korea at school, rarely had enough chance to speak in English.
>> I studied English at school in Korea and rarely had enough chance to speak in English.
Even though I did a double majored in English literature, sadly I\'m not such a good speaker of English.
>> Even though I took a double major in English literature, sadly I\'m not such a good English speaker.
This made me choose Power English and it really helps me a lot.
>> Correct.
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