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2015-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Essay: What motivates you to study English? People who can speak in English fluently motivate me a lot. I've been into English-speaking country since i was preschool child. I used to say aloud "Hiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" to the foreigners living in same neighbor hood at the age of 4, 5. I studied English only in Korea at school, rarely had enough chance to speak in English. Even though I did a double majored in English literature, sadly I'm not such a good speaker of English. This made me choose Power English and it really helps me alot.

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Hello [이름]! Thanks for sending this in. I hope that you will become a fluent English speaker. ~Kelly^^ Essay: What motivates you to study English?People who can speak in English fluently motivate me a lot. >> Correct. >> or: I am really motivated by people who can speak Ebglish fluently. I\'ve been into English-speaking country since i was preschool child. >> I\'ve been into an English-speaking country since I was in preschool. I used to say aloud \"Hiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\" to the foreigners living in same neighbor hood at the age of 4, 5. >> I used to say \'hi\' loudly to the foreigners living in our neighborhood when I was four and five years old. I studied English only in Korea at school, rarely had enough chance to speak in English. >> I studied English at school in Korea and rarely had enough chance to speak in English. Even though I did a double majored in English literature, sadly I\'m not such a good speaker of English. >> Even though I took a double major in English literature, sadly I\'m not such a good English speaker. This made me choose Power English and it really helps me a lot. >> Correct.

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