24.10.2018 homework to Gina

Hi Su[이름]!

Thank you for sending me a message and for submitting your composition. Below is my correction/ revision of the essay that you submitted. I also want to thank you for your appreciative words. I really appreciate it. I also want to say that you should really be more positive and you should believe in your self more. Even if I\'m a teacher now, I can still remember that it was also hard for me to learn English before since I was used to our local dialect. But one thing I learned is that, if you are determined to learn, it\'s fine if you make mistakes as long as you\'re doing your best to make them right and to improve. I know that you can do it, Su[이름]! ^^

Anyway, have a good night and take care. See you soon! ^^

~Teacher Gina

I think the best invention is the smart phone. Of course, if there\'s no smart phone we can study by books and contact with someone by letter or walking. But these days, we can immediatly communicate with someone who helping us by the smart phone at the emergency time. And it offers the opportunity of study in limitative place. For instance, I can learn English in Korea from the teacher who live in the Philippines! That is wonderful. It attends us to become more smart, safe, healthy and also serves entertainments. So smart phone is the greatest invention in my opinion.

>> I think the best invention is the smart phone. Of course, even if there\'s no smart phone, we can still study by reading books and contact someone by writing letters and delivering them. But these days, we can immediately communicate with someone by using the smartphone especially during emergencies. It also offers the opportunity to study in a limitative place. For instance, I can learn English in Korea from the teacher who lives in the Philippines. That\'s wonderful. It attends us to become smarter, safer, healthier and it also serves entertainment. That is why smartphone is the greatest invention in my opinion.