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I live in countryside. I moved there 10 years ago. Near the house where I live are my office and some schools for my children. That is reason why I moved there. However I have to go to my office for 30 minute with my car. My office is located in countryside. If I want to take a bus, I have to wait for a long time. So many my coworkers drive their cars. If my office is located in city, I will take a bus or subway everyday. It is a good to save some money.

Hello [이름]!   You explained well. Some reminders: 1. Don\'t forget your articles. 2. In English, the subjunctive mod is used to explore conditional or imaginary situations. example: If I were President, I wouldn’t put up with it.   Teacher Venus^^   I live in countryside. >>>I live in the countryside. I moved there 10 years ago. >>>CORRECT Near the house where I live are my office and some schools for my children. >>>CORRECT That is reason why I moved there. >>>CORRECT However I have to go to my office for 30 minute with my car. >>>However I have to go to my office for 30 minutes with my car. My office is located in countryside. >>>My office is located in the countryside. If I want to take a bus, I have to wait for a long time.>>>CORRECT   So many my coworkers drive their cars. >>>So many of my coworkers drive their cars. If my office is located in city, I will take a bus or subway everyday.>>>If my office were located in the city, I would take a bus or subway everyday.   It is a good to save some money. >>>It is good to save some money.