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학생이 쓴 원문
It is very unhealthy for student\'s mental and body condition 24-hour study cafes.
I think that show illogical studying patterns of our students.
All studying exists only for examination and good results to gain benefit.
The worst thing is that they could not any kinds of pride and accomplishment from learning.
To learn is not pleasure but torture to them.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
Since we have a different culture about this, I am really wondering why certain individuals do that. Okay, let\'s say that competition is firece in Korea, but does it make a person less meaningful if they back down just a bit? Yes, competition can be good and healthy iin a different way.
Aki~
It is very unhealthy for student\'s mental and body condition 24-hour study cafes.
>> CORRECT!
I think that show illogical studying patterns of our students.
I think that show illogical studying patterns of our students.
>> I think that shows illogical studying patterns of our students.
All studying exists only for examination and good results to gain benefit.
All studying exists only for examination and good results to gain benefit.
>> CORRECT!
The worst thing is that they could not any kinds of pride and accomplishment from learning.
The worst thing is that they could not any kinds of pride and accomplishment from learning.
>> The worst thing is that they don\'t h kinds of pride and accomplishment from learning.
To learn is not pleasure but torture to them.
To learn is not pleasure but torture to them.
>> To learn is not pleasure but to torture them.
>> To learn is not pleasure but a torture for them.
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