24Jan2025_Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: Which is the best way for you to watch a movie?
Answer: I think cinema is best above all. There is big screen, a great sound system, and popcorn!! These days cinemas have reclining seat which are really comportable.
of course, we can watch a lot of movies at home throught streaming, but I can watch the lateast movies quickly at the cinema that is good!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! I have heard of those cinemas with reclining seats. They even serve you food! But, I think, movie tickets have skyrocketed. It\'s unbelievable.
-T. Sonny
I think cinema is best above all. >>I think, the cinema would be the best way to see a movie above all.
There is big screen, a great sound system, and popcorn!!
>>There is a big screen, a great sound system, and most especially, popcorn!
These days cinemas have reclining seat which are really comportable.
>>These days have reclining seats which are totally comfortable.
of course, we can watch a lot of movies at home throught streaming, but I can watch the lateast movies quickly at the cinema that is good!
>>Of course, we can watch tons of movies at home through streaming, but what makes going to the cinema better is that I can watch the latest movies quickly.
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