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Hi there. I'm calling to ask about your gym.
What kinds of programs are available?
Can you tell me how much they are?
Can I get the discount?
Because I would like to sign up for a membership with my family.
Give me a call when you get this. Thanks.
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Hi there. I\'m calling to ask about your gym.
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>> Hello, I want to inquire about your gym.
What kinds of programs are available?
>> Correct
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>> What programs are available?
Can you tell me how much they are?
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>> Could you tell me how much each programs cost?
Can I get the discount?
>> Do you give discounts?
Because I would like to sign up for a membership with my family.
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Give me a call when you get this. Thanks.
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>> Please give me call back when you get this message. Thank you.
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