25 Oct. 2012

2012-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

학생이 쓴 원문

25, Oct. 2012 I really felt so tired today. but I don't know, why I feel so tired. I couldn't to do work any more on today. I would like to stop the work from now on. This time is 16:00. I decided that I am going to postpone the remains work from today to tomorrow. I don't want to work. But. if I must have to work under the situation. Perhaps, I will find a many of mistakes on the report. I am going to leave in the office at 18:00. Also, I will get a enough sleep tonight and I will start the work tomorrow in the new mind.

강사 첨삭


Hello there.^^
It truly is difficult for many people to go on with their work when their mind and body are not in their fine condition.
Your plan is actually something that most people would do to make their works more desirable.
Just check the following corrections so your expressions will be much smoother.
Enjoy your day!
_T.Anne^^
25, Oct. 2012
>> 25th October, 2012
I really felt so tired today. but I don\'t know, why I feel so tired.

>> I really feel so tired today and I don\'t know why.
I couldn\'t to do work any more on today.

>> I couldn\'t work today anymore.
I would like to stop the work from now on. This time is 16:00.

>> I would like to stop working now. The time id 16:00.
I decided that I am going to postpone the remains work from today to tomorrow.

>> I decided to postpone the remaining woeks that I have to do today for tomorrow.
I don\'t want to work. But. if I must have to work under the situation.

>> I don\'t want to work but I must work under the situation.
Perhaps, I will find a many of mistakes on the report.

>> Perhaps, I will find many mistakes on the report.
I am going to leave in the office at 18:00.

>> I am going to leave the office at 18:00.
Also, I will get a enough sleep tonight and I will start the work tomorrow in the new mind.
>> Also, I will get enough sleep tonight for me to start the work tomorrow with a new [fresher] mind.

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