250402_ Homework

2025-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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1. How do you prepare for a trip abroad? The way I prepare for a trip is so simple. At first, I usually book a flight ticket and hotel. I think it\'s the all thing I have to do before traveling. and then, every my spare time, I search the information or tips about trip area. such as the Food, sights, any interesting things there. 2.What are some things that you enjoy while travelling? I love nature. So It\'s quite important thing that I decide the destination. also I like to go to a historical place. so I try to add the tour course in my trip. especially, when i travel alone, it\'s always be a good choice. also, I like experience the traditional food in that country or city. So I used to search and make a plan following the good restaurant and cafe. This is the one of the ways I enjoy my trip.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jay,


Thanks for sharing your thoughts about travelling. I love how detailed you are!


-Teacher Ash


The way I prepare for a trip is so simple.

>> CORRECT!


At first, I usually book a flight ticket and hotel.

>> First, I usually book a flight ticket and hotel.


 I think it\'s the all thing I have to do before traveling.

>> I think it\'s the main thing I have to do before traveling.


and then, every my spare time, I search the information or tips about trip area. 

>> And then, in my spare time I search for helpful tips when traveling to that place. 


such as the Food, sights, any interesting things there.

>> For example, I search for the best food, sights, and interesting things about that place. 


I love nature.

>> CORRECT


 So It\'s quite important thing that I decide the destination.

>> So, destination is the most important for me. 


also I like to go to a historical place. 

>> Also, I like visiting historical places. 


so I try to add the tour course in my trip.

>> So, I try to add the tour guide services to my trip. 


especially, when i travel alone, it\'s always be a good choice.

>> Especially when I travel alone, it has always been a good choice for me. 


also, I like experience the traditional food in that country or city.

>> I also like to experience the traditional food in that country. 


So I used to search and make a plan following the good restaurant and cafe.

>> So, I search and plan how to go to that famous restaurant or cafe. 


This is the one of the ways I enjoy my trip.

>> These are some things I do to enjoy my trip. 


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