250402_ Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about travelling. I love how detailed you are!
-Teacher Ash
The way I prepare for a trip is so simple.
>> CORRECT!
At first, I usually book a flight ticket and hotel.
>> First, I usually book a flight ticket and hotel.
I think it\'s the all thing I have to do before traveling.
>> I think it\'s the main thing I have to do before traveling.
and then, every my spare time, I search the information or tips about trip area.
>> And then, in my spare time I search for helpful tips when traveling to that place.
such as the Food, sights, any interesting things there.
>> For example, I search for the best food, sights, and interesting things about that place.
I love nature.
>> CORRECT
So It\'s quite important thing that I decide the destination.
>> So, destination is the most important for me.
also I like to go to a historical place.
>> Also, I like visiting historical places.
so I try to add the tour course in my trip.
>> So, I try to add the tour guide services to my trip.
especially, when i travel alone, it\'s always be a good choice.
>> Especially when I travel alone, it has always been a good choice for me.
also, I like experience the traditional food in that country or city.
>> I also like to experience the traditional food in that country.
So I used to search and make a plan following the good restaurant and cafe.
>> So, I search and plan how to go to that famous restaurant or cafe.
This is the one of the ways I enjoy my trip.
>> These are some things I do to enjoy my trip.
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