25nov2024_homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Do you have any friends from a different culture or country than you? Do your differences make it harder to be friends?
Answer :
In the past, I met friends of various country. but I don\'t have meet recently.
But I working with various country people now.
While differences can sometimes create chanllenges, the effort to understand and communicate with each other strengthens our collaboration.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I agree with you. Multicultural friendships can be challenging but they surely can develop mutual respect and understanding.
-T. Sonny
In the past, I met friends of various country. >>In the past, I met friends from various countries.
but I don\'t have meet recently.
>>But I have not met anyone recently.
But I working with various country people now.
But I working with various country people now.
>>But I work with people from various countries now.
OR. I work in a globally diverse environment.
While differences can sometimes create chanllenges, the effort to understand and communicate with each other strengthens our collaboration.
While differences can sometimes create chanllenges, the effort to understand and communicate with each other strengthens our collaboration.
>>While differences can sometimes create challenges, the effort to understand and communicate with each other strengthens our collaboration.
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