25th July

Today I learned "hang up on someone" & "discretion". Among these, I am going to tell "descretion". When I was young, I didn’t listen to the adult's advice about the harmlesss of the bad culture. I just think that all kinds of movies is O.K. because I can judge everythinng which is good or bad. But now, I know that it is not. The bad movie affects the children badly. I also know that the current young generation can't accept the advice of the old one about their problems in the culture or tendency. Someday they will know this and they try to persuade it to their young generation like now the old one. We easily say "I know this", but I think that we only can tell "konwing" after experience.

Hello [이름]! That is right! We should always be careful in what children should watch nowadays. They should watch educational and non violent acts so that they would not do it. And yes, eventually in the future they will realize that. Thank you for your comment about the topic. I am always happy to read your composition. See you tomorrow! T.Faye   Here are your corrections: Today I learned "hang up on someone" & "discretion". >>I learned about "hang up on someone" & "discretion today.Among these, I am going to tell "descretion". >>Among these, I would like to share something about "descretion".When I was young, I didn’t listen to the adult's advice about the harmlesss of the bad culture. >>When I was young, I didn't listen to the adult's advice about the harm that bad culture gives.I just think that all kinds of movies is O.K. because I can judge everythinng which is good or bad. >>I just thought that all movies are OK because I know how to judge right from wrong.But now, I know that it is not. >>Correct! The bad movie affects the children badly. >>OK >>Bad movies affect children badly.I also know that the current young generation can't accept the advice of the old one about their problems in the culture or tendency. >>Correct!Someday they will know this and they try to persuade it to their young generation like now the old one. >> Someday they will realize this and they will try to persuade the young generation about the bad effects of this like what the older people are doing to them right now.We easily say "I know this", but I think that we only can tell "konwing" after experience. >>Correct! >>Correct Spelling: KNOWING