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2015-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

My working day is almost same everyday. After I arrive at my office, I drink some coffee. There is a coffee machine for employees. And then I check my email. I am in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team. After I had lunch, I usually do English homework. Sometimes when I have a break time, I sleep a nap at lunch time. In the afternoon I often attend a meeting for my team. I like my job and I want to work for a long time.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are getting better at memorizing. Some reminders: The word \'same\' can be used as pronoun or adjective or adverb.   I think we should add \'the\' before the word \'same\' unless we use it as an adverb.   When it comes to adverb, we can use the word in both ways \'same\' or \'the same\', \'the same\' is normal though.   I could find some examples in a dictionary. 1. [adj] In essence, all computers are the same. 2. [pron] We made the decision which was right for us. Other parents must do the same. 3. [adv] \'Nice to meet you,\' said Michael. \'Same here,\' said Mary Ann    [adv] \'Have a nice Easter.\'-\'And the same to you Bridie.\'    Teacher Venus^^   My working day is almost same everyday. >>>My work schedule is almost the same everyday. After I arrive at my office, I drink some coffee. >>>CORRECTThere is a coffee machine for employees. >>>CORRECTAnd then I check my email. >>>CORRECTI am in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team. >>>CORRECTAfter I had lunch, I usually do English homework.>>>After I had lunch, I usually do my English homework. Sometimes when I have a break time, I sleep a nap at lunch time. >>>Sometimes when I have a break time, I take a nap at lunch time. In the afternoon I often attend a meeting for my team. >>>CORRECTI like my job and I want to work for a long time. >>>CORRECT

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