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2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi, there, I singed up for a membership at your gym last week. But I'm afraid there is a proble with the gym. I want to learn YOGA but youga class didn't do in your gym. So I want to visit there to get a refund. Would that be possible? Can you tell me when I can visit the your office? What are your business hours? Give me a call when you get this. Thanks.

강사 첨삭

Hi, there, I singed up for a membership at your gym last week.

>> Hi (good morning or afternoon), I signed up for a membership in your gym last week.
 But I\'m afraid there is a proble with the gym.

>> But I\'m afraid there is a problem with the program want to enroll in.
 I want to learn YOGA but youga class didn\'t do in your gym.

>> I want to learn Yoga but Yoga class is not available.
 So I want to visit there to get a refund.

>> Correct

or

>>> So, I want to drop by to get a refund.
 Would that be possible?

>> Correct
 Can you tell me when I can visit the your office?

>> When can I visit your office? 

or

>> When is the best time for me to visit your office?
 What are your business hours?

>> Correct
 Give me a call when you get this. Thanks.

>> Please call me back when you get this message. Thank you.

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