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Hi, there, I singed up for a membership at your gym last week.
>> Hi (good morning or afternoon), I signed up for a membership in your gym last week.
But I\'m afraid there is a proble with the gym.
>> But I\'m afraid there is a problem with the program want to enroll in.
I want to learn YOGA but youga class didn\'t do in your gym.
>> I want to learn Yoga but Yoga class is not available.
So I want to visit there to get a refund.
>> Correct
or
>>> So, I want to drop by to get a refund.
Would that be possible?
>> Correct
Can you tell me when I can visit the your office?
>> When can I visit your office?
or
>> When is the best time for me to visit your office?
What are your business hours?
>> Correct
Give me a call when you get this. Thanks.
>> Please call me back when you get this message. Thank you.
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