26th. Mar. 2019.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I know that you are very hardworking.
I also realize that you are very busy.
You don\'t have to worry.
You can improve a lot and be ready for the test.
Don\'t give up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
yes, I agree becuase we usually use a smart phone nowadays and a lot of industry is impoving the technology about smart phone;
>> Yes, I agree because we usually use smart phones nowadays.
and a lot of industry is impoving the technology about smart phone;
>> A lot of industries also work on improving the features of smart phones.
so we can see the book on phone and see e-book.
>> We can read e-books using our phones.
do you understand?
>> Do you understand?
so we are not need to buy the book in order to read it.
>> That\'s why we don\'t need to buy books to read.
so I agree this argument
>> I definitely agree with this argument.
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