26th. Mar. 2019.

2019-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Hello teahcer As you say I have to study Englsih more but I should work every day.. I want to study English all day. I\'m so sorry but you can help me everyday. So I can cheer up. anyway you ask the qeoustion how to think about books have being lost important and entertaining. yes, I agree becuase we usually use a smart phone nowadays and a lot of industry is impoving the technology about smart phone so we can see the book on phone and see e-book. do you understand? so we are not need to buy the book in order to read it. so I agree this argument

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I know that you are very hardworking.

I also realize that you are very busy.

You don\'t have to worry.

You can improve a lot and be ready for the test.

Don\'t give up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
yes, I agree becuase we usually use a smart phone nowadays and a lot of industry is impoving the technology about smart phone;

>> Yes, I agree because we usually use smart phones nowadays.

and a lot of industry is impoving the technology about smart phone;

>> A lot of industries also work on improving the features of smart phones.

so we can see the book on phone and see e-book.

>> We can read e-books using our phones.

do you understand?

>> Do you understand?

so we are not need to buy the book in order to read it.

>> That\'s why we don\'t need to buy books to read.
so I agree this argument

>> I definitely agree with this argument.

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