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학생이 쓴 원문
First, I tried to eat vegetables and fruits as often as I could.
They cantain a lot of vitamins.
Next, I tried to drink a lot of water as much as I could.
I think eating helped me stay healthy and lose some weight.
강사 첨삭
First, I tried to eat vegetables and fruits as often as I could.
>> Correct
They cantain a lot of vitamins.
>> They contain many vitamins.
Next, I tried to drink a lot of water as much as I could.
>> Correct
I think eating helped me stay healthy and lose some weight.
>> Correct
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