27Nov2024_homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: What kind of ambitions did you have as a child?
Answer:
As a child I had ambitions was o become a doctor because their the gown looked nice.
But I realise as I grew older very difficult becoming a dorctor.
So I gave up becoming doctor very easy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! For me, I don\'t know why but I have never dreamt of becoming a doctor. I guess, it already appeared difficult for me ever since I was a child.
-T. Sonny
As a child I had ambitions was o become a doctor because their the gown looked nice.>>As a child, I had an ambitions of becoming a doctor because their gowns looked nice.
But I realise as I grew older very difficult becoming a dorctor.
But I realise as I grew older very difficult becoming a dorctor.
>>But I realized as I grew older that it was very difficult to become a doctor.
So I gave up becoming doctor very easy.
>>So, I gave up becoming a doctor very easily.
OR. I backed out of becoming a doctor without much thought.
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