27th Feburary's homework

2018-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

How are you? Thank you for the last class. No sooner I realized that you gave me a homework yesterday than I did homework. The homework including 5 sentences is that you gave me following: My expectation is that through the classes my speaking skills would be improved by the instructor by making full sentences. So, I'm going to learn speaking class on the phone to reach my goal which is explaining my expression what I'd like to freely. At first I felt a little nervous so I couldn't say the sentences even the vocabulary I have to say.

강사 첨삭

Hi Spring!

Thank you for your composition.

I promise to help you reach your goal.

Let\'s work together!

Please take note of the corrections below.

~~ Teacher Sharon

My expectation is that through the classes my speaking skills would be improved by the instructor by making full sentences.

>> My expectation is that through these classes, my speaking skills would improve with the help of the instructor and by making complete sentences.

So, I\'m going to learn speaking class on the phone to reach my goal which is explaining my expression what I\'d like to freely.

>> So, I\'m taking a speaking class over the phone to reach my goal which is explaining my thoughts spontaneously.

At first I felt a little nervous so I couldn\'t say the sentences even the vocabulary I have to say.

>> At first I felt a little nervous so I couldn\'t express myself well.

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