27th March
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there SPRING!
Thanks for writing this.
But I got a little bit confused with your essay. Anyway, let\'s talk more about it tomorrow.
See yah!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Hi, Teacher Shanee^^
QUOTE FOR THE DAY:
\"Success occurs when your dreams get bigger than your excuses.\"
HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
It has often been said, “Ignorance is bliss,” and “What you don’t know won’t hurt you.” Do you agree with these statements? Why
or why not? Write an essay which is not more than ten sentences.
I agree with those statements.
>>> Correct!
If it didn\'t take an effect to communicate with the people, It would rather avoid talking with them.
>>> If there was no need to communicate with other people, I would rather avoid talking with them.
Unless it could avoid or ignore them, it might happen to me terribly.
>>> However, if I avoid or ignore them, it may happen to me too.
But I don\'t want to hurt myself.
>>> I don\'t want to hurt myself.
Also, I need to have the right to protect and stay my emotion peacefully.
>>> I have to the right to protect myself form getting hurt.
Second, the reason of ignorance I couldn\'t speak to anyone who is reluctant to understand me.
>>> The second reason of ignorance is I can\'t speak to anyone who is reluctant to understand me.
Lastly, I\'d like to avoid the circumscances that don\'t make sence and then look for someone showing up to arbitrate between us.
>>> Lastly, I\'d like to avoid the senseless situations and look for someone who can arbitrate for us.
The communication is not the best way any more.
>>> Correct!
For these reasons, that is altenative to the ignorance.
>>> For these reasons, that is alternative to ignorance.
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