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Finally! you are done with your final homework with me.

Please check my corrections.

~Kelly^^

Essay: What is your favorite American TV program and why do you like it?
I watched Amerian TV alot with subtitles about 10 years ago.

>> I watched a lot of  American TV programs with subtitles about ten years ago. 

That time, i was 3rd grade of middle school.

>> That time, I was a third grade middle school student.

I barely remeber any program i watched since 10 years has passed already.

>> I barely remember a program that I watched ten years ago.

The one i can remind of is a reality show of Paris Hilton and her friend Nicole Richie.

>> The one I can remind of is a reality show of Paris Hilton and her friend Nicole Richie.

I and my older sis seated on sofa and watched how lucky girls born with gold spoons spend the time.

>> My older sister and I were seated on a sofa while watching \"how lucky girls born with gold spoons spend the time.\"

and I realized that \"Oh, life is unfair!\"at the age of 14.

>> And at the age of fourteen [14], I realized that life is unfair.

lol Oh, i just came across my mind which program i really liked.

>> The program that I really liked watching suddenly came across my mind.

\"Desperate Housewives\" I\'ve watched this drama about for a decade.

>> \"Desperate Housewives\" I\'ve watched this drama for about a decade.

and I cried for real when all season\'s over.

>> and I cried for real when the last season was over.

I\'m watching Sex and the city recently to wake me up from the state of pumpkin-headed.

>> Recently, I watch Sex and the City to wake me up from my  pumpkin-head state.

It stimulates me.

>> Correct.

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