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학생이 쓴 원문
Wow.
It is very diffcult because I never think about it.
I think...information is very important to trade.
So if I could trade with someone, I want to trade him or her who has a lot of frinds.
I also want to trade with an honest person.
강사 첨삭
Wow.
It is very diffcult because I never think about it.
>> It is very difficult because I have never thought about it.
I think...information is very important to trade.
>> Correct
So if I could trade with someone, I want to trade him or her who has a lot of friends.
>> So if I could trade with someone, I want to trade with him or her who has a lot of friends.
I also want to trade with an honest person.
>> Correct
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