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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.
I am in the library in my neighborhood with my children.
It is very trying.
Befor I mentioned about my eldest daughter.
She is not diligent and honest.
She is teenager.
She likes to go to the library but she doesn't study.
She only watch YuTube on her smartphone in the library.
So I come here with her because I have to keep an eye on her.
I want her to change her life.
강사 첨삭
Hi.
I am in the library in my neighborhood with my children.
>> Correct
It is very trying.
>> Correct
or
>> It is exhausting.
Befor I mentioned about my eldest daughter.
>> Before, I mentioned about my eldest daughter.
She is not diligent and honest.
>> Correct
She is teenager.
>> She is a teenager.
She likes to go to the library but she doesn\'t study.
>> Correct
She only watch YuTube on her smartphone in the library.
>> She only watches YouTube on her smartphone in the library.
So I come here with her because I have to keep an eye on her.
>> Correct
I want her to change her life.
>> Correct
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