29Nov2024 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Would you rather be a leader or a follower?
Answer: I don\'t think deserve to be a leader because a leader has to be decisive, but I am very swayed by person and have very difficulty in making decisions. So I think follower is better than leader.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I think decisiveness is a critical quality a leader must have. But also, it is important to be open to and considerate of your followers\' opinions in the decision process.
-T. Sonny
I don\'t think deserve to be a leader because a leader has to be decisive, but I am very swayed by person and have very difficulty in making decisions. >>I don’t believe I deserve to be a leader because leadership requires decisiveness, and I tend to be easily influenced by others, making decision-making challenging for me.
So I think follower is better than leader.
>>So I think being a follower is better than being a leader.
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