2days 3nights fieldtrip
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Teacher Brian,
I went to fieldtrip last Monday to Wednesday.
>>> I went to the school\'s fieldtrip last Monday to Wednesday
The program was too boring.We went to Chiack Mountain.And we rode a jeep line.
>>> The program was too boring, We went to Chiack Mountain and we rode a jeep line.
It was really exciting.I enjoyed it.But another program it was too boring.
>>> It was really exciting, I enjoyed it but the other programs was too boring
We had recreation and go to maze and solve the quiz.
>>> We had a recreation program and went to the maze and solve the quiz.
I hope next year traveling will be fun.
>>> I hope that next time the travel will be more fun.
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