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2020-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Form negative sentences in Present Progressive she /a bag / carry >she isn\'t carrying a bag. Albert /squash / play>Albert isn\'t playing squash we / in the mountains / walk>we aren\'t walking in the mountains he / to school / go>He isn\'t going to school the teacher / our homework / check>The teacher isn\'t checking our homework we / our rooms / clean>We aren\'t cleaning our rooms your father / a lorry / drive>Your father isn\'t driving a lorry they / in the lake / swim>They aren\'t swimming in the lake he / a blue shirt / wear>He isn\'t wearing a blue shirt You / flowers / bring>You aren\'t bringing flowes. My greatest strength is that I\'m sensible and fast. When I offer the customer service, I provide it from the customer\'s point of view. So, I\'ve heard a lot that I have a good sense. And while doing many kinds of works, I realized that I was adapting quickly to my work. So, I tend to handle works very quickly. And no matter where I work, I was evaluated a hard worker all the time.

강사 첨삭

Hi Donna! I really appreciate the effort. Good job! 
I think this kind of grammar homework is quite easy for you! ^ ^ More practice writing next time! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

she /a bag / carry >she isn\'t carrying a bag.
>>CORRECT
Albert /squash / play>Albert isn\'t playing squash.
>>CORRECT
we / in the mountains / walk>we aren\'t walking in the mountains
>>CORRECT
he / to school / go>He isn\'t going to school
>>CORRECT
the teacher / our homework / check>The teacher isn\'t checking our homework
>>CORRECT
we / our rooms / clean>We aren\'t cleaning our rooms
>>CORRECT
your father / a lorry / drive>Your father isn\'t driving a lorry
>>CORRECT
they / in the lake / swim>They aren\'t swimming in the lake
>>CORRECT
he / a blue shirt / wear>He isn\'t wearing a blue shirt
>>CORRECT
You / flowers / bring>You aren\'t bringing flowers.
>>CORRECT
My greatest strength is that I\'m sensible and fast. 
>>CORRECT
When I offer the customer service, I provide it from the customer\'s point of view. 
>>CORRECT
So, I\'ve heard a lot that I have a good sense. 
>>So, I have always been complimented with my sensibility.
And while doing many kinds of works, I realized that I was adapting quickly to my work. 
>>And while doing all sorts of work, I realized that I was able to adapt quickly no matter what circumstances I have.
So, I tend to handle works very quickly. 
>>So, I tend to handle my job/work quite efficiently.
And no matter where I work, I was evaluated a hard worker all the time.
>>CORRECT

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