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You play the piao beautifully.
I would like tow glasses of milk.
I sat in the coffee shop.
This song is better than that song.
Yesterday, I played for two hours!
Here is my homework.
Did you have a fun Christ Mas day? Mine was not so good. I went to look for some students who are wandering in downtown being crzay just before big holliday. It was very cold in Korea, so I caught a cold. I have to prepare for my third test, interview, but I had to stay at home, taking some medicine. Anyway, I and the other school's teachers haven't found any crazy students, we just handed out some fliers with some information that we should keep our children inside for our sake. However, the shop owners who have billiards or PC room, which is internet caffe in your contry, hated us getting around. For we went there with the police officers and they thought the costomer were hasitant to come inside of the door.
Now I'm getting dressed up for school.
I hope to see you soon. Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I had fun this Christmas because I was with my family. I hope you\'ll feel better soon.
Thank you for the composition:) I\'ll call you late!
You play the piao beautifully.
>>You play the piano beautifully.I would like tow glasses of milk.
>>I would like two glasses of milk.I sat in the coffee shop.
>>CORRECTThis song is better than that song.
>>CORRECTYesterday, I played for two hours!
>>CORRECTHere is my homework.
>>CORRECTDid you have a fun Christ Mas day?
>>Did you have a fun Christmas day?
Mine was not so good.
>>CORRECT
I went to look for some students who are wandering in downtown being crzay just before big holliday.
>>I went to look for some students downtown who were wandering just before the big holiday.
It was very cold in Korea, so I caught a cold.
>>CORRECT
I have to prepare for my third test and interview, but I had to stay at home, taking some medicine.
>>CORRECT
Anyway, I and the other school\'s teachers haven\'t found any crazy students, we just handed out some fliers with some information that we should keep our children inside for our sake.
>>Anyway some teachers and I haven\'t found any crazy students so we just handed some fliers with some information that we should keep our children at home.
However, the shop owners who have billiards or PC room, which is internet caffe in your contry, hated us getting around.
>>However, the shop owners who have billiards or P C room ( which you call internet caffee in your country) hated us roaming around.
For we went there with the police officers and they thought the costomer were hasitant to come inside of the door.
>>We went there with police officers and they thought that a customer hesitated to come inside.Now I\'m getting dressed up for school.
>>CORRECTI hope to see you soon. Bye~ >>CORRECT
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