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i made a decision to study hard from this time. so i made a choice the early morning class for the phone englsh. but actually it's very difficult and hard thing to study in the early morning. but. i promise to myself "i'll do my best". but whenever i finish the class, i'm so depressed by my english skill. i asked myself, "why arnt u good at speaking and listening in english? i need some change point which my english skill level up. but. i dont know exactly what it's the best way for it. i will not give up, i'll try and try without giving up. 'faye, please give me a hand" ^^ frankly speaking, i have no talent about learing english. and there is no relation with my job. but i always want to be a good speaker. if u give me a hand. i believe that i can do it soon. see u tommorrow~ ^^

Hi [이름]! Thank you for your composition today. I would be happy to help you in anything. If you have any questions just feel free to ask. I will always be here to help in any way I can. Please be guided by the corrections below. Have a good time! T. Faye I made a decision to study hard from this time. >> I made a decision to study hard this time. so i made a choice the early morning class for the phone englsh. >> So I made a choice to study in a phone English class early in the morning. but actually it's very difficult and hard thing to study in the early morning. >> It's actually very difficult to study early morning. but, i promise to myself "i'll do my best". >> But, I promised myself that I will do my best. but whenever i finish the class, i'm so depressed by my english skill. >> Whenever I finish the class, I'm so depressed because of my English skill. i asked myself, "why arnt u good at speaking and listening in english? >> Correct! >>Capital letter: "I" and "Why". >>Spelling: aren't. i need some change point which my english skill level up. >> I need to improve my English skill. but. i dont know exactly what it's the best way for it. >> I don't know exactly what's the best way to do it. i will not give up, i'll try and try without giving up. >> Correct. 'faye, please give me a hand" ^^ >> Correct. >> Faye, please lend me a hand. --better frankly speaking, I have no talent about learning english. >> Correct. and there is no relation with my job. >> It is not realted with my job. but I always want to be a good speaker. >> Correct. if u give me a hand, i believe that i can do it soon. see u tommorrow~ ^^ >> Correct. (Please observe formal writing.)