2nd homework

2015-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Carman. It was great time as well. I was sad because I couldn't speak the story very well. But, you were waiting for me and listening carefully. Thank you so much. You said me that I didn't answer the calling. Because my cellphone' battery was low, I changed the other battery. Anyway, Have a good dinner and Have a nice day :) 1. Danny wanted a new bicycle for Christmas. a) A O b) AN c) THE 2. Jennifer tasted the birthday cake her mother had made. a) A b) AN c) THE O 3. The children have a new teacher called Mr. [Name]. a) A O b) AN c) THE 4. All pupils must obey the rules. a) A b) AN c) THE O 5. Dad turned on the radio to listen to the news. a) A/A b) A/THE c) THE/THE O

강사 첨삭


Good Evening, Sumin!
Thank you once again for answering your homework.
I appreciate that you continue to do your homework.
You did a perfect job! Congratulations and keep it up!!^^
I just hope that you maintain this kind of enthusiasm in learning.
Learning comes with perseverance, patience and determination.
You have to give your best effort every time!I hope you will remember what you learned in your daily conversations.
Keep on learning. Study harder and be the best of who you are!^^

Teacher Carmen^^

Hello, Carman.
>> Hello, Carmen!

It was great time as well.
>> It was a great time as well.

I was sad because I couldn\'t speak the story very well.
>>  I was sad because I couldn\'t tell the story very well.

But, you were waiting for me and listening carefully.
>> Correct!
OR>> However, you were just waiting for me and listening carefully.

Thank you so much.
>> Correct!

You said me that I didn\'t answer the calling.
>> You said to me that I didn\'t answer the call.

 Because my cellphone\' battery was low, I changed the other battery.
>> It\'s because my cellphone\'s battery was low and I changed it with the other battery.

Anyway, Have a good dinner and Have a nice day :)
>> Anyway, have a good meal at dinner and have a nice day! :)

1. Danny wanted a new bicycle for Christmas.
a) A O
b) AN
c) THE
>> Correct!

2. Jennifer tasted the birthday cake her mother had made.
a) A
b) AN
c) THE O
>> Correct!

3. The children have a new teacher called Mr. [Name].
a) A O
b) AN
c) THE
>> Correct!

4. All pupils must obey the rules.
a) A
b) AN
c) THE O
>> Correct!

5. Dad turned on the radio to listen to the news.
a) A/A
b) A/THE
c) THE/THE O
>> Correct!

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