2nd homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Elaine!
You are really consistent in doing your homework.
This will be very helpful in your improvement.
Keep it up!
I hope to see your progress as we have more exercises.
I\'ll talk to you in class!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I could grow up anywhere in the world, i\'m sure that i would choose Norway.
>> If I could grow up anywhere in the world, I\'m sure that I would choose Norway.
When I was young, I gave the similar question was that \'How do you want to grow up?\'
>> When I was young, I was given a similar question which was, \"\'How do you want to grow up?\"
and then I answered that I will go to Norway.
>> I also said that I would like to grow up in Norway.
I remember that reason.
>> I do remember the reason.
when i first heard \'Norway\' i did understand \'Whstern roe deer\'s way\'.
>> When I first heard the word \"Norway\", the expression \" Western roe deer\'s way\" came to mind.
Because \'Nor\' pronunciation in Korea similar that \'Western roe deer\'
>> This is because, \"Nor\" means \"Western roe deer\" in Korean
So I thought that Norway is many western roe deers.
>> This is why I thought that Norway had many western roe deer.
I was like animals so i wrote that.
>> I used to like animals so I became interested in Norway.
And this memory is enshrined in my heart.
>> I will always keep this memory in my heart.
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