2nd homework

2017-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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If I could grow up anywhere in the world, i'm sure that i would choose Norway. When I was young, I gave the similar question was that 'How do you want to grow up?', and then I answered that I will go to Norway. I remember that reason. when i first heard 'Norway' i did understand 'Whstern roe deer's way'. Because 'Nor' pronunciation in Korea similar that 'Western roe deer' So I thought that Norway is many western roe deers. I was like animals so i wrote that. And this memory is enshrined in my heart. Sorry to many sentences.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elaine!

You are really consistent in doing your homework.

This will be very helpful in your improvement.

Keep it up!

I hope to see your progress as we have more exercises.

I\'ll talk to you in class!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

If I could grow up anywhere in the world, i\'m sure that i would choose Norway.

>> If I could grow up anywhere in the world, I\'m sure that I would choose Norway.
When I was young, I gave the similar question was that \'How do you want to grow up?\'

>> When I was young, I was given a similar question which was, \"\'How do you want to grow up?\"

and then I answered that I will go to Norway.

>> I also said that I would like to grow up in Norway.
I remember that reason.

>> I do remember the reason.
when i first heard \'Norway\' i did understand \'Whstern roe deer\'s way\'.

>> When I first heard the word \"Norway\", the expression \" Western roe deer\'s way\" came to mind.

Because \'Nor\' pronunciation in Korea similar that \'Western roe deer\'

>> This is because, \"Nor\" means \"Western roe deer\" in Korean
So I thought that Norway is many western roe deers.

>> This is why I thought that Norway had many western roe deer.

I was like animals so i wrote that.

>> I used to like animals so I became interested in Norway.

And this memory is enshrined in my heart.

>> I will always keep this memory in my heart.

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