2nd homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
How do you spend your free time?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
Originally I spend free time with my puppy or relax at home. When I spend free time at home, I like to watching TV or Youtube. But recently I made up my mind to watching British drama when I spend free time. So after I finish homework, I will look for a romance British drama.
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CORRECTIONS:
Originally, I spend free time with my puppy or relax at home. When I spend free time at home, I like watching TV or YouTube. But recently, I prefer watching British drama when I have free time. So, after I finished homework, I look for a British romance drama.
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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