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2015-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hi, Marie, hey,sorry for the wrong spelling of ur name. It was miss typing.^^;;; Beside, I really appreciate for ur correcting on my writing!!!! I wish I could learn this Eng [by word of mouth]. If it can happen, I will feel like a million dollars. And you know what?! I assume myself, I look like a million dollars.(oh my god..) Well, let's [cut to the chase]! I know one idiom which has very similar meaning. And I also like this idiom much. The idiom is "Don't beat around the bush". The meaning is "just get the introduction out and get straight to the point(conclusion)". It's how I understand these 2 idioms, is it correct? For the 3rd one, I just turned into thirties this year. It's a lot different with when I was in twenties. I mean my mind and the way to face the world. so, I'm still getting [to find my feet]!! Gooooooooooooooooood???? Ummmm, Marie, If u don't mind, could plz explain me those three idioms which are [twist someone's arm, stab someone in the back, ring a bell].

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Hello [이름]! I really enjoyed reading your composition. It\'s oozing with wit and sense of humor. I almost died laughing. Hahaha! Thank you for making my day. I would like you to check your work for spelling and typographical errors too. When we say \"twist someone\'s arm\", it means someone has done a great job of convincing you of doing something. You don\'t literally twist someone\'s arm, that would be too painful. Haha! For example, \"I\'m scared of flying so my friends had to twist my arm to get me to travel with them to another country\". The idiom \"stab someone in the back\" should not be taken literally because if you do, you\'ll be in jail. Haha! It means you \"hurt someone who was close to you and trusted you by betraying them secretly and breaking their trust.\" For example: My bestfriend just stabbed me in the back when she started dating my ex-boyfriend.\" The last idiom \"ring a bell\" means that \"somebody has mentioned something to us which sounds familiar, perhaps we\'ve heard it before -- in other words when someone says something that you believe you\'ve heard in the past alarm bells start ringing and you try to remember how or why that name or place sounds familiar\". For example: \"The name Lee Donghae rings a bell, but I couldn\'t quite remember where I\'ve heard it before.\" I hope you get it now! ^^ Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hi, Marie, >> CORRECT! hey,sorry for the wrong spelling of ur name. >> Hey, sorry for spelling your name wrong. It was miss typing.^^;;; >> I mistyped it.Beside, I really appreciate for ur correcting on my writing!!!! >> I really appreciate you correcting my writing. I wish I could learn this Eng [by word of mouth]. >> I wish I could learn English by word of mouth.If it can happen, I will feel like a million dollars. >> If that happens, I will feel like a million dollars. And you know what?! >> CORRECT! I assume myself, I look like a million dollars.(oh my god..) >> I assume that I look like a million dollars. OR >> I feel that I look like a million dollars. Well, let\'s [cut to the chase]! >> CORRECT! I know one idiom which has a very similar meaning. >> CORRECT! And I also like this idiom much. >> And I also like this idiom very much. The idiom is \"Don\'t beat around the bush\". >> CORRECT! The meaning is \"just get the introduction out and get straight to the point(conclusion)\". >> CORRECT! It\'s how I understand these 2 idioms, is it correct? >> It\'s how I understand these two idioms. Is it correct?For the 3rd one, >> CORRECT! I just turned into thirties this year. >> I just started my thirties this year. It\'s a lot different with when I was in twenties. >> It\'s a lot different when I was in my twenties. I mean my mind and the way to face the world. >> I\'m talking about my way of thinking and how I face the world. so, I\'m still getting [to find my feet]!! >> So I\'m still finding my feet. Gooooooooooooooooood???? >> CORRECT! Ummmm, Marie, >> CORRECT! If u don\'t mind, could plz explain me those three idioms which are [twist someone\'s arm, stab someone in the back, ring a bell].  >> If you don\'t mind, could you please explain to me these three idioms: twist someone\'s arm, stab someone in the back, ring a bell.      

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