2th e-mail
학생이 쓴 원문
hi! I took your e-mail.
I worried as you denied my request about facebook's friend (Actually,I'm angry)
if you have mouth, tell me about it!!
Don't say me you are cute girl
because i have heard that saying so much now i'm sick of it kk
you said i want to hurt your feeling in any moment
Then i will revenge you. i'll kill you
I drunk alcohol a couple of days at Alex's home
But i didn't fun any more because you were away :(
I wish you return korea as soon as possible
and i hope everything works for you
Today is the end of the year
I'm going to meet with my friends
But we have a lot of snow today
So i will walk carefully not to fall
I need your help
Ah!
It is correct to what you wrote spell in your e-mail
Anyway thank you to respond
Happy New Year
강사 첨삭
Hi Coro!!! Wow!!! Who are you fighting with, you seemed so mad. ^^ Anyways dear try to check this composition. Have a Happy New Year!!!Lei J
2th email
>>2nd email
hi! I took your e-mail.
>> Hi!!! I received your email.
I worried as you denied my request about facebook's friend
>>I was worried because you denied my request to be your friend at facebook.
?lt;/span>(Actually,I'm angry) if you have mouth, tell me about it!!
>>(Actually I'm angry) If you have a mouth tell me about it.
Don't say me you are cute girl
>>Don't tell me that you are a cute girl.
because i have heard that saying so much now i'm sick of it kk
>>Because I have heard so much about you and now I am sick about.
you said i want to hurt your feeling in any moment
>>You said that I am trying to hurt your feeling everytime.
Then i will revenge you. i'll kill you
>>Then I will have a revenge and I'll kill.
I drunk alcohol a couple of days at Alex's home
>>I drunk alcohol at Alex's place a couple of days ago.
But i didn't fun any more because you were away :(
>>But I didnn't have fun because you were away.
I wish you return korea as soon as possible and i hope everything works for you
>>I wish you could go back here as soon as possible, I hope everything works for you.
Today is the end of the year
>>correct
I'm going to meet with my friends
>>I'm going to meet my friends.
But we have a lot of snow today
>>correct
So i will walk carefully for me not to fall
>>correct
I need your help
>>correct
Ah!
>>correct
It is correct to what you wrote spell in your e-mail
>>I wrote the correct spelling on your email.
Anyway thank you to respond
>>Anyways thank you for responding.
Happy New Year
>>correct
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