2th e-mail

2010-12-31 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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hi! I took your e-mail. I worried as you denied my request about facebook's friend (Actually,I'm angry) if you have mouth, tell me about it!! Don't say me you are cute girl because i have heard that saying so much now i'm sick of it kk you said i want to hurt your feeling in any moment Then i will revenge you. i'll kill you I drunk alcohol a couple of days at Alex's home But i didn't fun any more because you were away :( I wish you return korea as soon as possible and i hope everything works for you Today is the end of the year I'm going to meet with my friends But we have a lot of snow today So i will walk carefully not to fall I need your help Ah! It is correct to what you wrote spell in your e-mail Anyway thank you to respond Happy New Year

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Hi Coro!!! Wow!!! Who are you fighting with, you seemed so mad. ^^ Anyways dear try to check this composition. Have a Happy New Year!!!Lei J   2th email >>2nd email hi! I took your e-mail. >> Hi!!! I received your email. I worried as you denied my request about facebook's friend >>I was worried because you denied my request to be your friend at facebook. ?lt;/span>(Actually,I'm angry) if you have mouth, tell me about it!! >>(Actually I'm angry) If you have a mouth tell me about it. Don't say me you are cute girl >>Don't tell me that you are a cute girl. because i have heard that saying so much now i'm sick of it kk >>Because I have heard so much about you and now I am sick about. you said i want to hurt your feeling in any moment >>You said that I am trying to hurt your feeling everytime. Then i will revenge you. i'll kill you >>Then I will have a revenge and I'll kill. I drunk alcohol a couple of days at Alex's home >>I drunk alcohol at Alex's place a couple of days ago. But i didn't fun any more because you were away :( >>But I didnn't have fun because you were away. I wish you return korea as soon as possible and i hope everything works for you >>I wish you could go back here as soon as possible, I hope everything works for you. Today is the end of the year >>correct I'm going to meet with my friends >>I'm going to meet my friends. But we have a lot of snow today >>correct So i will walk carefully for me not to fall >>correct I need your help >>correct Ah! >>correct It is correct to what you wrote spell in your e-mail >>I wrote the correct spelling on your email. Anyway thank you to respond >>Anyways thank you for responding. Happy New Year >>correct

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