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When i eat the baked sweet potato, I\'m happy and keep warm my body.
And i drink the hot tea to keep health of my neck.
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Eat well, [이름] [이름]!
A healthy balanced diet will help keep you warm and healthy in the winter. Make sure you and your family eat at least one hot meal a day like soup which is nutritious, keeps you warm and is inexpensive to make or buy.
- Kristine ^^
When i eat the baked sweet potato, I\'m happy and keep warm my body.
>> Roasted sweet potato makes me happy and keeps my body warm.
And i drink the hot tea to keep health of my neck.
And i drink the hot tea to keep health of my neck.
>> I also drink tea to keep my neck warm.
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