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My office has two buildings and I am working one of two buildings.
There is a coffee machine so I can get some coffee while I ralex.
Also there are two water coolers and a guest room in my office.
My office has three conference rooms for employees and a staff cafeteria.
In the backroom, there is a photocopier and an fax machine.
My co-workers have a personal computer.
I also use a computer at work.
I need it for almost every assignment I work on.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are improving. Some reminders:
1. Check your spelling.
2. Don\'t forget to put articles.
Teacher Venus^^
My office has two buildings and I am working one of two buildings.
>>>My office has two buildings and I am working in one of the two buildings.
There is a coffee machine so I can get some coffee while I ralex.
>>>There is a coffee machine so I can get some coffee when I relax.
Also there are two water coolers and a guest room in my office.
>>>CORRECT
My office has three conference rooms for employees and a staff cafeteria.
>>>CORRECT
In the backroom, there is a photocopier and an fax machine.
>>>In the backroom, there is a photocopier and a fax machine.
My co-workers have a personal computer.
>>>CORRECT
I also use a computer at work.
>>>CORRECT
I need it for almost every assignment I work on.
>>>CORRECT
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