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2016-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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My office has two buildings and I am working one of two buildings. There is a coffee machine so I can get some coffee while I ralex. Also there are two water coolers and a guest room in my office. My office has three conference rooms for employees and a staff cafeteria. In the backroom, there is a photocopier and an fax machine. My co-workers have a personal computer. I also use a computer at work. I need it for almost every assignment I work on.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are improving. Some reminders: 1. Check your spelling.   2. Don\'t forget to put articles.   Teacher Venus^^   My office has two buildings and I am working one of two buildings. >>>My office has two buildings and I am working in one of the two buildings. There is a coffee machine so I can get some coffee while I ralex. >>>There is a coffee machine so I can get some coffee when I relax. Also there are two water coolers and a guest room in my office. >>>CORRECT My office has three conference rooms for employees and a staff cafeteria. >>>CORRECT In the backroom, there is a photocopier and an fax machine. >>>In the backroom, there is a photocopier and a fax machine. My co-workers have a personal computer. >>>CORRECT I also use a computer at work. >>>CORRECT I need it for almost every assignment I work on. >>>CORRECT

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