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If i was a musical instrument, I would to play harp.
Because when i watching play a harp video, It\'s so improving for me.
Furthermore the instrument appearance looks beautiful.
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Learning a musical instrument not only sustains and feeds the brain, but it also improves so many other cognitive and physical aspects of the human body. It\'s been widely studied and proven that learning a musical instrument improves memory; it not only improves your cognitive memory but also muscle memory as well.
- Kristine ^^
If i was a musical instrument, I would to play harp.
>> If I was a musical instrument, I would to be a harp.
Because when i watching play a harp video, It\'s so improving for me.
>> Because watching harp video is so mesmerizing.
Furthermore the instrument appearance looks beautiful.
Furthermore the instrument appearance looks beautiful.
>> In additiona, the design of this instrument is really stunning.
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