3.10 homework

2023-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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I think that dutch treat is good for friends. But if it’s lovers dutch treat is not good. Because if I buy something to my friends they could be burden. But if I but something to my lover, the lover will be happy to me. And the lover will be buy a better one. Also, dutch treat is not good for my family. If I have to buy something to my family, I will not dutch treat. It is good to dutch treat other peoples.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ye [이름]!
Thank you for writing your homework! 
Have a great weekend~  ^^
-T.Jhozel 
I think that dutch treat is good for friends. 
>> Correct!
But if it’s lovers dutch treat is not good.
>> But dutch treat is not good for dating couple.
Because if I buy something to my friends they could be burden. 
>> Because my friends might feel burdened if I buy them something.
But if I but something to my lover, the lover will be happy to me. 
>> But if I give my partner something, he or she will be pleased with me.
And the lover will be buy a better one.
>> And the partner will purchase a better one.
Also, dutch treat is not good for my family. 
>> Dutch treats are also not good for my family.
If I have to buy something to my family, I will not dutch treat.
>> If I have to buy something for my family, I will not do dutch treat.
It is good to dutch treat other peoples.
>> It is good to practice dutch treat with others.

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