3.10 Homework

2015-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good afternoon! What's your favorite spring memory? I like spring because spring clothes the land with green leaves. I can feel that spring is just around the corner in Korea.I have good memories for the spring, one of those was a trip with my family last year. It was perfect weather for picnic. we took many pictures together and we enjoyed many flowers as much as we could. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]!

Seems like you enjoy spring season. You should be because the weather is perfect for picnic and many other outdoor activities. Have fun with your family!^^

Anyway, thanks for sending this in.

~Kelly^^

Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
What\'s your favorite spring memory?
I like spring because spring clothes he land green leaves.

>> I like spring because of spring clothes and the land covered with green leaves.

I can feel that spring is just around the corner in Korea.

>> Correct.

I have good memories for the spring, one of those was a trip with my family last year.

>> I have good memories in spring, one of those was a trip with my family last year.

It was perfect weather for picnic.

>> It was a perfect weather for picnic.

we took many pictures together and we enjoyed many flowers as much as we could.
>> W
e took many pictures together and enjoyed seeing many flowers as much as we could.
Thank you!

>> Correct.

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