3.10 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [이름]!
Seems like you enjoy spring season. You should be because the weather is perfect for picnic and many other outdoor activities. Have fun with your family!^^
Anyway, thanks for sending this in.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
What\'s your favorite spring memory?
I like spring because spring clothes he land green leaves.
>> I like spring because of spring clothes and the land covered with green leaves.
I can feel that spring is just around the corner in Korea.
>> Correct.
I have good memories for the spring, one of those was a trip with my family last year.
>> I have good memories in spring, one of those was a trip with my family last year.
It was perfect weather for picnic.
>> It was a perfect weather for picnic.
we took many pictures together and we enjoyed many flowers as much as we could.
>> We took many pictures together and enjoyed seeing many flowers as much as we could.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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