3-10th Homework

2016-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think nobody know the result after following an opinion of the person or the crowd. The most important thing when we determine something is for whom. Is this opinions for just a person or not? Even if the opinion is from the person, if it would be determined for everyone, I would agree with. The problem in this case is how to know the intention. In some cases, there may be some covered intention that we don't catch. So, many people want to know the person who submitted the opinion. For examples, the person's past activities and background. These would be the basic material for us to estimate the opinion. To determine something is not easy, it's because the merit and fault are along with. So, we try to find where the merits are encouraged and the faults are lessened. The majority rules are always not good and the opinion of the person is not always bad. We could not easy to follow the minority opinion, it's because we feel the nervousness since we don't follow the majority.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^_^ Thank you for giving out your opinions in relation to this subject. I think your answers are good. :) In my opinion, following the crowd is never good. It\'s because doing such removes our capability to think for our own selves. The main reason why most people follow the crowd is because they don\'t want to make a mistake. But the truth is, that is the biggest mistake because you fail to come up with a very good decision. Most people end up with regrets the moment they find out that the decision made by the majority is actually wrong. That\'s why it is very important to learn how to decide for yourself and not just to go along with the crowd. I hope you\'re having an excellent day. See you again on Thursday. Take care. ~Teacher C[이름] :) I think nobody know the result after following an opinion of the person or the crowd. >> I think nobody knows the result after following an opinion of another person or the crowd. The most important thing when we determine something is for whom. >> CORRECT! OR >> The most important thing when we determine something is, for whom do we do it for? Is this opinions for just a person or not? >> Is this opinion just for a person or not? Even if the opinion is from the person, if it would be determined for everyone, I would agree with. >> [Do you mean]: Even if the opinion is from a single person, if it would be for the best interest of everyone then I would agree with it. The problem in this case is how to know the intention. >> The problem in this case is, how would we know the intention? In some cases, there may be some covered intention that we don\'t catch. >> In some cases, there may be some hidden intentions that we don\'t know (about).So, many people want to know the person who submitted the opinion. >> CORRECT! OR >> That\'s why many people want to know the person who gave the opinion. For examples, the person\'s past activities and background. >> For example, people want to know the person\'s past activities and background.These would be the basic material for us to estimate the opinion. >> CORRECT! OR >> These would be the basis for us to evaluate the opinion. To determine something is not easy, it\'s because the merit and fault are along with. >> To determine something is not easy. It\'s because the merit and fault go along with it.So, we try to find where the merits are encouraged and the faults are lessened. >> [Do you mean]: So, we try to find where the merits are and lessen the faults.The majority rules are always not good and the opinion of the person is not always bad. >> The majority rules are not always good and the opinion of a single person is not always bad.We could not easy to follow the minority opinion, it\'s because we feel the nervousness since we don\'t follow the majority. >>  We could not easily follow the minority\'s opinion because we feel nervousness since we think the majority\'s opinion is better.

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