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2015-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I am a part of the Customs Clearance Department which has 7 members. I am a manager in the Customs Clearance Department. I am in charge of the export. Also I am in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team. When my co-workers have some problems, I have to write reports instead of them. When I was a new employee, I had to work on the weekend but these day I work only on the week days. Nevertheless, I like my job. I want to work for a long time my office.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I\'m proud of you because you have more correct sentences. Some reminders: 1. these days \'These\' is plural so use it with a plural noun.   2. Don\'t forget your prepositon here. I want to work for a long time in my office.   Teacher Venus^^   I am a part of the Customs Clearance Department which has 7 members. >>>CORRECT I am a manager in the Customs Clearance Department. >>>CORRECT I am in charge of the export. >>>CORRECT Also I am in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team. >>>CORRECT When my co-workers have some problems, I have to write reports instead of them. >>>CORRECT When I was a new employee, I had to work on the weekend but these day I work only on the week days. >>>When I was a new employee, I had to work on the weekend but these days I work only on the week days. Nevertheless, I like my job. >>>CORRECT I want to work for a long time my office. >>>I want to work for a long time in my office.

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