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I am a part of the Customs Clearance Department which has 7 members.
I am a manager in the Customs Clearance Department.
I am in charge of the export.
Also I am in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team.
When my co-workers have some problems, I have to write reports instead of them.
When I was a new employee, I had to work on the weekend but these day I work only on the week days.
Nevertheless, I like my job.
I want to work for a long time my office.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I\'m proud of you because you have more correct sentences. Some reminders:
1. these days
\'These\' is plural so use it with a plural noun.
2. Don\'t forget your prepositon here.
I want to work for a long time in my office.
Teacher Venus^^
I am a part of the Customs Clearance Department which has 7 members.
>>>CORRECT
I am a manager in the Customs Clearance Department.
>>>CORRECT
I am in charge of the export.
>>>CORRECT
Also I am in charge of collecting data and writing reports for my team.
>>>CORRECT
When my co-workers have some problems, I have to write reports instead of them.
>>>CORRECT
When I was a new employee, I had to work on the weekend but these day I work only on the week days.
>>>When I was a new employee, I had to work on the weekend but these days I work only on the week days.
Nevertheless, I like my job.
>>>CORRECT
I want to work for a long time my office.
>>>I want to work for a long time in my office.
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