3.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good evening!
Homework
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Telephone and E-mail have made communication among people less personal.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Yes, telephone and E-mail are less personal. Sometimes they will be recorded and tapped.
But the convenience of them will be coverd the risk of less personal.
The affair of National Intelligence Service in Korea is a good example of this problem.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Great Thursday because the most awaited day, Friday, will be tomorrow.
Thank you for your time doing your homework.
You are able to answer the question well but try to support your answer more. In that way you are expanding your vocabularies to defend you answer.
And you are also improving your writing and grammar skill. ^^.
You can do better than that.^^
Until here, have a wonderful night and day tomorrow. See you!.^^
-T. Kelly
Hi there! Good evening!
>>correct
Homework
>>correct
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
>>correct
Telephone and E-mail have made communication among people less personal.
>>correct
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
>>correct
Yes, telephone and E-mail are less personal. Sometimes they will be recorded and tapped.
>>Yes, telephone and E-mail made communication less personal. Sometimes they can be recorded or tapped.
But the convenience of them will be coverd the risk of less personal.
>>But the convenient of it can be covered of the risk of being less personal.
The affair of National Intelligence Service in Korea is a good example of this problem.
>>The National Intelligence service in Korea is a good example of this problem.
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