3.11 Homework

2015-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! I am glad that weather is getting warmer and warmer in Korea. Have a fantastic Wednesday! Does technology change your quality of life? Many kind of technologies are much developed in recent years. The technology change our quality of life speedingly. For example, how convenient it is to use the remote control and smart phone. I know that wireless charger technology is already developed by Korean company recently. I am sure that the technology development will give us more convenience day by day. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! I agree with your statement that technology has helped us in a lot of ways. Our lives became more convenient because of it. But we should not depend our lives to it. Have a good day!~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. I am glad that weather is getting warmer and warmer in Korea. >> Correct.Have a fantastic Wednesday! >> Correct.Does technology change your quality of life?Many kind of technologies are much developed in recent years. >> Technology has been much developed in recent years. The technology change our quality of life speedingly. >> Technology changed our quality of life speedily. For example, how convenient it is to use the remote control and smart phone. >> For example, it is convenient to use a remote control and smartphone. I know that wireless charger technology is already developed by Korean company recently. >> I know that wireless charger has already been developed by Korean companies.  I am sure that the technology development will give us more convenience day by day.>> I am sure that the development of technology will give us more convenience day by day.Thank you! >> Correct.

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