3-11th Homework

2016-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

I think humans and animals learn from their experiences. We can take a lot of advantages from surroundings where we are. Of course, we can catch up with other's knowledge from books or other's experience. But this is not real but just is a saying. In our surroundings, there are many various things which we can not imagine. To learn from books which there are many things in our surroundings is not enough. I think where we have to learn is our surroundings. During the children, they must see and feel everything as much as possible. If they grow up, they don't enough time to see and feel something since they are busy just to live. Adults have to earn money to maintain their life, which is very serious problem to them. If they are brave, they may live as they enjoy their life. But in real life, there are many problems to be solved in order to enjoy my life. Anyway, whether you are young or not, to learn is very impressive for you. To learn something is good for you and me.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^How\'s your day so far? I hope you have already solved the problem with your working board. Thank you for having the time to answer our essay question for today despite your busy schedule. Your opinions are really good and I totally agree when you said experiences are very important. In my opinion, experiences, whether they\'re good or bad are all significant. Good experiences give us good feelings and bad experiences teach us lessons that we could use in our life. Good experiences show us our worth and bad experiences inspire us to do better. Anyhow, I hope  you are having a great day. See you again tomorrow. Take care and stay warm. ^^~Teacher C[이름] I think humans and animals learn from their experiences. >> CORRECT! OR >> In my opinion, humans and animals are able to learn from their experiences.We can take a lot of advantages from surroundings where we are. >> We can take a lot of advantages from our surroundings.Of course, we can catch up with other\'s knowledge from books or other\'s experience. >> CORRECT! OR >> Of course, we can learn from other\'s knowledge from books or other\'s experience.But this is not real but just is a saying. >> But this is not real and is just a saying.In our surroundings, there are many various things which we can not imagine. >> CORRECT! OR >> In our surroundings, there are a lot of unimaginable things. To learn from books which there are many things in our surroundings is not enough. >> Learning from books that we find in our surroundings is not enough.I think where we have to learn is our surroundings. >> I think we have to learn from our surrounding/environment itself.During the children, they must see and feel everything as much as possible. >> [Do you mean]: Children are inclined to see and feel everything. If they grow up, they don\'t enough time to see and feel something since they are busy just to live. >> When they grow up, they don\'t have enough time to see and feel something since they are busy with their lives.Adults have to earn money to maintain their life, which is very serious problem to them. >> Adults have to earn money to maintain/sustain their lives, which is a very serious problem to them.If they are brave, they may live as they enjoy their life. >> If they are brave, they may live and enjoy their lives.But in real life, there are many problems to be solved in order to enjoy my life. >> But in real life, there are many problems to be solved in order to enjoy life.Anyway, whether you are young or not, to learn is very impressive for you. >> [Do you mean]: Anyway, whether you are young or not, learning is very important for you. OR >> Anyway, whether you are young or not, to learn something is very important for you.To learn something is good for you and me. >> CORRECT! OR >> Learning something is good for you and me.

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