3.12 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good evening!
I am very busy after my trip. I am sorry.
Homework
What is your greatest fear in life?
I am afraid that I should be fired. then my family will be poor.
That is my greatest fear in life.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Happy happy Wednesday!
I hope your not that busy today.^^
With regards to your homework. I would be better if your going to expand your ideas more.kkkk^^. It\'s OK if your essay if it is short essay but it should have a sense.
Supporting your answer so that your answer would be interesting to read. But its OK for now.^^ You can do better than that.
Anyway, have a goodnight sleep tonight. Rest well.^^
Hi ma\'am! Good evening!
>>correct
I am very busy after my trip. I am sorry.
>>correct
Homework
>>correct
What is your greatest fear in life?
>>correct
I am afraid that I should be fired. then my family will be poor.
>>I am afraid that I will be fired and then my family will become poor.
That is my greatest fear in life.
>>correct
Thank you!
>>correct
Happy happy Wednesday!
I hope your not that busy today.^^
With regards to your homework. I would be better if your going to expand your ideas more.kkkk^^. It\'s OK if your essay if it is short essay but it should have a sense.
Supporting your answer so that your answer would be interesting to read. But its OK for now.^^ You can do better than that.
Anyway, have a goodnight sleep tonight. Rest well.^^
Hi ma\'am! Good evening!
>>correct
I am very busy after my trip. I am sorry.
>>correct
Homework
>>correct
What is your greatest fear in life?
>>correct
I am afraid that I should be fired. then my family will be poor.
>>I am afraid that I will be fired and then my family will become poor.
That is my greatest fear in life.
>>correct
Thank you!
>>correct
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