3.12 Homework

2015-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It's already Thursday. Do you have any plans for this weekend? Make good plans and enjoy yourself. Is adventure important in your life? Why? Yes, I think so. Adventure is important in our life. Most people would love to live more stable. If there haven't been adventure, we can't enjoy taking a trip by airplain. People often try to do some adventure in their youth, but I am not considering about adventure any more. Because I think that I am already an old guy. I want to avoid the risk, so I want to spend my later years comfortably. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. I agree with you that adventure is important in our life. Life itself is already an adventure. So enjoy it to the fullest!^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! It\'s already Thursday. >> Correct. Do you have any plans for this weekend? >> Correct. Make good plans and enjoy yourself. >> Correct.Is adventure important in your life? Why?Yes, I think so. Adventure is important in our life. >> Correct. Most people would love to live more stable. >> Most people want to have a stable life. If there haven\'t been adventure, we can\'t enjoy taking a trip by airplain. >> If there\'s no adventure, we won\'t enjoy enjoy taking a trip by plane. People often try to do some adventure in their youth, but I am not considering about adventure any more. >> People often try to do some adventure in their youth, but I am not thinking about adventure any more. Because I think that I am already an old guy. >> Correct. I want to avoid the risk, so I want to spend my later years comfortably.>> I want to avoid taking a risk, so I want to spend my retirement years comfortably. Thank you! >> Correct.

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