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2019-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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No, I don\'t think so. Surely, I think the intelligence based on genetics or a child\'s environment is a certain and easy way to be an intelligent person. But, even if we don\'t have any background like that, I think we can have intelligence. However, we need the motivation to change by myself. The intelligence could get from a study and manage ourselves. This is very common for researchers. To be a good or smart researcher, we think about the study or reason of the results almost always. It might be directly intelligence to me. I know one of my friends to be intelligence. He was just a common boy when he was an undergraduate student. He had a plan to enter graduate school after his graduation for undergraduate school. But, he had a mistake to manage his curriculum, and his graduation was delayed one semester. Maybe he was shocked and disappointed by himself. After then, he was absolutely changed and study a lot he got the best award when he graduates master course.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework! I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

This is an awesome point, intelligence can either be inherited or acquired! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


No, I don\'t think so.

>>Correct
Surely, I think the intelligence based on genetics or a child\'s environment is a certain and easy way to be an intelligent person.

>>Correct
But, even if we don\'t have any background like that, I think we can have intelligence.

>>Correct
However, we need the motivation to change by myself.

>>However, we need the motivation to change ourselves.
The intelligence could get from a study and manage ourselves.

>>Intelligence may come from consistency in learning.
This is very common for researchers.

>>Correct
To be a good or smart researcher, we think about the study or reason of the results almost always.

>>Correct
It might be directly intelligence to me.

>>It may be an inherent intelligence or persistency with learning on my part. 
I know one of my friends to be intelligence.

>>I know one of my friends to be intelligent.
He was just a common boy when he was an undergraduate student.

>>Correct
He had a plan to enter graduate school after his graduation for undergraduate school.

>>Correct
But, he had a mistake to manage his curriculum, and his graduation was delayed one semester.

>>Correct
Maybe he was shocked and disappointed by himself.

>>Maybe he was shocked and got disappointed of himself.
After then, he was absolutely changed and study a lot he got the best award when he graduates master course.

>>After then, he absolutely changed and studied a lot and he got the best award when he graduated from his master course.

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