3.13 homework
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In my childhood, favorite event is maybe my parents give a surprise gift for me. Like a nintando.
And my mom made for me a special food.
And play with my cousin was very funny until elementary school. Because nowadays play with cousin is very tired thing.
In my childhood, with someone together is a very big event. But now is without someone is a very big event.
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In my childhood, favorite event is maybe my parents give a surprise gift for me. Like a nintando.
>> My best childhood memory is when my parents surprised me with a gift. It is like a Nintendo.
And my mom made for me a special food.
>> My mom also prepared a special meal for me.
And play with my cousin was very funny until elementary school.
>> And playing with my cousin was a lot of fun until elementary school.
Because nowadays play with cousin is very tired thing.
>> Because playing with cousins is a really tiring activity nowadays.
In my childhood, with someone together is a very big event.
>> In my childhood, being with someone was a big deal.
But now is without someone is a very big event.
>> Yet being alone now is a major event.
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