3.13 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon!
I am still very tired today. I had been off colour for a few days after my business trip.
So,I postoned tomorrow's my class.
Homework
Do you agree or disagree to the following statement?
Telrevision is the leading cause of violence in today's society.
Today's topic is the same one that I submited before. It has a double-face.
Man used to imitate a bad action offered by television. On the other hand,television offers us good and beautiful programs. So I disagree that television is the leading cause of violence in today's society.
Thank you! and I really appreciate your long, warm advice.
강사 첨삭
Hi again!Thank you so much for doing your homework though you are very busy and tired. I really do appreciate it too.With this activity, you were able to answer it well.^^Have a peaceful sleep and rest well.^^Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!>>correctI am still very tired today. >>correctI had been off colour for a few days after my business trip.>>correct So,I postoned tomorrow\'s my class.>>So, I ppostponed my class tomorrow. Homework>>correct Do you agree or disagree to the following statement?>>correct Telrevision is the leading cause of violence in today\'s society.>>Television is the leading cause of violence in today\'s society. Today\'s topic is the same one that I submited before. It has a double-face.>>Today\'s topic is the same with the one that I submitted before. It has a double face. Man used to imitate a bad action offered by television. >>Man used to imitate a bad action seen in the television.On the other hand,television offers us good and beautiful programs. >>correctSo I disagree that television is the leading cause of violence in today\'s society.>>correct Thank you! and I really appreciate your long, warm advice.>>Thank you and I really appreciate your long and warm advice.
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