3.13 Homework

2015-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly! It's a tremendous Friday,too! Finally, we can enjoy ourselves for this weekend. By the way, I have a suggestion that I'd like to open our class with yesterdat's homework issues as free talking for a few minutes everyday. I think that it helps me to be more memorable. Please look through this opinion. Homework 1)It's very cold outside. 2)There's a book on the desk. 3)It's 6 o'clock. 4)It's new 5)There's something in your drink. 6)There's a film at 10:30 Thank you! Have a great weekend and be careful!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you so much for you homework. You did a perfect job today. And your idea is brilliant. Thank you for your suggestion. Starting on Monday, we are going to discuss your homework.^^ Thanks and happy weekend! ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! It\'s a tremendous Friday, too! >> Correct. Finally, we can enjoy ourselves for this weekend.>> Finally, we can enjoy ourselves this weeknd.By the way, I have a suggestion that I\'d like to open our class with yesterdat\'s homework issues as free talking for a few minutes everyday. >> By the way, I have a suggestion.  Can we discuss about our homework for a few minutes everyday? I think that it helps me to be more memorable. >> Correct. Please look through this opinion.>> Please consider my opinion.Homework1) It\'s very cold outside. >> Correct. 2) There\'s a book on the desk. >> Correct.3)I t\'s 6 o\'clock. >> Correct.4) It\'s new >> Correct.5) There\'s something in your drink. >> Correct.6) There\'s a film at 10:30 >> Correct.Thank you! Have a great weekend and be careful! >> Correct.

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