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Hello [이름]!

Thanks for writing this and attaching the picture of the playground.

That brings back memories. C\")

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

My memory where I can remember fro my childhood is strong in playground. 

>>> A place from my childhood which can\'t be removed from my memory is a playground.
There were swings, slides, seesaws, horizontal bar, and so on.

>>> Correct!

(I attach the picture for your understanding ^^)

>>> I attached a picture for your understanding.
When I was an elementary student, I went to the playground in front my home everyday after school. 

>>> When I was an elementary student, I went to the playground in front of my home every day after school.
At that time, All kids just go to playground after school. 

>>> At that time, all kids went to the playground after school.
We can meet almost all friends naturally. 

>>> We can frequently meet most of our friends there.
Even if I don\'t know anyone in there, we became to be friend quickly.

>>> I even made friends easily there.
We can find that style of playground easily now.

>>> We can easily find that style of playground now.
However, it\'s not so popular.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: However, it\'s not popular among children.
There are almost no kids, because they are busy to go private academies.

>>> There are almost no kids because they are busy attending their private academies.
Sometimes, It\'s sad thing. 

>>> Sometimes, it\'s a sad thing.
Anyway, sometimes I feel I want to go back to be kid who doesn\'t have any concerns.

>>> Anyway, sometimes I feel I want to go back to being a kid who doesn\'t have any concerns.