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2019-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[A dog\'s sense of smell is an incredible two thousand times more acute than a human\'s. What sort of a world do you imagine it perceives?] My parents have two dogs. They know someone is coming to their home before knocking maybe due to the smell. I think the distinguishment of smell is the meaning of perception. It\'s like an intelligence. So, often we feel the dog understand human\'s speaking or mind. If I can have a sense of smell like a dog, I think it will make me tired. My nose will be very sensitive, and I want to check almost all smell shomewhere. But, fortunately, I can quickly recognize some emergency or dangerous situation.

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My parents have two dogs.

>>Correct
They know someone is coming to their home before knocking maybe due to the smell.

>>They know that someone is coming before he/she even reaches their home because of their strong sense of smell.
I think the distinguishment of smell is the meaning of perception.

>>Correct
It\'s like an intelligence.

>>Correct
So, often we feel the dog understand human\'s speaking or mind.

>>So often, we feel that dogs can understand what we are saying to them.
If I can have a sense of smell like a dog, I think it will make me tired.

>>If I would have a sense of smell like that of a dog; I will probably feel tired.
My nose will be very sensitive, and I want to check almost all smell shomewhere.

>>My nose will be very sensitive, and I want to check almost all the smells everywhere.
But, fortunately, I can quickly recognize some emergency or dangerous situation.

>>Correct or

>> Fortunately, it\'s easy for me to sense an emergency or dangerous situation.

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