3/13 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have to choose right now, I will choose a career advancement than having a child.
However, even if so, I can\'t predict which future will be better.
I know that children make adults realize many things for life.
Maybe it can be a sacrifice, love, responsibility, and so on.
So, people say that when they have children, they become true adults.
My mom says if I have a baby, I will want to live and work harder for the child.
And it makes me and my life better.
I understand it, but it may or may not.
Maybe I am afraid of this uncertainty.
Having a baby is a kind of miracle, but we can not return or back to the past the situation.
Some people desperately want children, but it\'s sad that they don\'t have children, and some people have a child they don\'t want.
It is really ironic.
Sometimes I don\'t know if I deserve to be a parent.
I know that no one becomes a parent after perfect preparation to become a parent.
Perhaps I need courage and belief that I can work well and raise children well.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thanks for the prompt response. It is truly insightful-having children can be scary but as you said, it can also be a miracle. So even if I want to help you figure out the answer, I am sorry, I can\'t. I don\'t have any ideas either:)
-Rachel
If I have to choose right now, I will choose a career advancement than having a child.
>> correct
>> If I have to choose now, I will choose career advancement over child birth,
However, even if so, I can\'t predict which future will be better.
However, even if so, I can\'t predict which future will be better.
>> However, I still can\'t predict which choice is better in the future.
I know that children make adults realize many things in life.
I know that children make adults realize many things in life.
>> correct
Maybe it can be a sacrifice, love, responsibility, and so on.
Maybe it can be a sacrifice, love, responsibility, and so on.
>> Maybe it is called sacrifice, love or responsibility.
So, people say that when they have children, they become true adults.
So, people say that when they have children, they become true adults.
>> correct
My mom says if I have a baby, I will want to live and work harder for the child. And it makes me and my life better.
My mom says if I have a baby, I will want to live and work harder for the child. And it makes me and my life better.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
I understand it, but it may or may not.
>> I understand her, but what she said may or may not be what it is,
Maybe I am afraid of this uncertainty.
Maybe I am afraid of this uncertainty.
>> correct (perfect)
Having a baby is a kind of miracle, but we can not return or go back to the past the situation.
Having a baby is a kind of miracle, but we can not return or go back to the past the situation.
>> correct
Some people desperately want children, but it\'s sad that they don\'t have children, and some people have a child they don\'t want.
It is really ironic.
Some people desperately want children, but it\'s sad that they don\'t have children, and some people have a child they don\'t want.
It is really ironic.
correct (perfect!)
Sometimes I don\'t know if I deserve to be a parent. I know that no one becomes a parent after perfect preparation to become a parent.
Perhaps I need courage and belief that I can work well and raise children well.
Sometimes I don\'t know if I deserve to be a parent. I know that no one becomes a parent after perfect preparation to become a parent.
Perhaps I need courage and belief that I can work well and raise children well.
>> correct (amazing!)
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