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2023-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lexie

학생이 쓴 원문

What did you do last weekend? What will you do this weekend? Do you have any specific plans? I went to the hair salon to get my haircut because this semester started this week. I also went to the bookstore to prepare textbooks. I will have party to celebrate my friend’s birthday.

강사 첨삭

Hello!

Thank you for completing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contributes to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!

Regards,

Teacher Lexie

What did you do last weekend? What will you do this weekend? Do you have any specific plans?

I went to the hair salon to get my haircut because this semester started this week.

>> I went to the hair salon to get my haircut because the new semester started this week.

I also went to the bookstore to prepare textbooks.
>> I also went to the bookstore to buy some textbooks.
I will have party to celebrate my friend’s birthday.
>> This coming weekend, I will go to a party to celebrate my friend’s birthday.

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